Description:
A resume is a concise document that highlights the skills, qualifications, and experience of an applicant. It should be easy to scan for quick overviews on potential candidates who best fit your company's needs. That being said, you may want to re-examine some words on which many employers spend their time reading resumes. For example, "fluffers" are unnecessary, redundant modifiers, such as 'very' or 'really.'
For recruiters not to waste precious seconds scanning through hundreds of job applicants per hour looking at individual documents with these types of redundant phrases, it can make sense in some instances to omit them from the original text intended for submission purposes.
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This particular restaurant technology focused council. Okay. So these kinds of words, like when people do this these are things that, again, that a lot of times resume companies will do for you.
They'll add all this stuff about you and
That's actually interesting. But this sort of thing is leads, transformational initiatives. So these sorts of words are. Yeah, these are like fluffer words. And and typically when when an employer is looking at this, it's okay to have these fluffer words in there, but a lot of times it detracts from things and and people, aren't going to look at this stuff and and really it's not gonna it's it, I think it does more harm than good.
This is how, people do resumes a lot of times, but it's not necessarily, it can just remember, always looking to things. Don't make people work hard with a lot of words on a resume. So just con this experiences better. Okay. Believe them are technological. Okay. That's cool.
Okay. So there's a lot of stuff on here. But a lot of it is quite interesting. And and it's for the type of work that this person does or this technology company. It also, it looks unique and and this person is probably a senior technology council, but so I would try to maybe get this down to maybe four bullet points would be what I would do.
And and since this experience has been for the past four years, essentially, or three years oh, very good. I think in terms of what this person has done recently, it looks very positive. And then and then I also how this person has had just a lot of employment in various law firms they've gone and looks up, it looks appealing in house right out of school.
That was not a very good economy back then, by the way. So it's pretty awesome. They were able to get back in this, these firms. I don't think this firm was like most firms wasn't making offers from 2001. I've been around long enough to know that. So the but yeah, this is, I like this resume.
I think that everything about this resume. Is very strong for what this person wants to do. So I, I personally like it there's a lot of employment stability. There's the there's there's a lot of good things about it. I think I even, even though there's a lot of bullet points here I think a lot of this is very interesting.
And and so I like it I don't know some of this stuff here probably could come off you don't need to talk about being on the Dean's list or you got the top grade in corporate law. And then this leadership scholarship was interesting, so probably would leave that on there.
I think this is probably the community involvement and interest. If you think that that's necessary to leave that on there, that's fine. It's these are things that you're interested in. I pay, I don't, sometimes I get a little nervous when people put their their, the exact nature of their That type of volunteer work and stuff that they're doing because, law firms and companies don't, necessarily, w R if, I don't know if someone has a lot of time for international travel, they may not like that.
If someone has time to raise a foster family, I I think that's a very good thing, but who knows? You just have to be careful. So I think these are all good activities, but at the same time you don't want to, you wouldn't want to necessarily, if you were heading to far right organization or a far left organization, or if you were playing, I don't know, very expensive sport or something I've seen people say stuff like enjoy flying my jet on the weekends.
That's probably not a good thing. Getting a Southern just things along those lines. But other than that, this is a great resume. I don't see anything wrong with that at all. I think it's a very strong one. I just would shorten some of this stuff up. It's pretty obvious what you do. And I think it's a very good resume, especially for someone to come into a technology company or a growing company, or help people with a transition, a company, transitioning and having a lot of issues coming up.
